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Flash Freeze chapter 5

The plot thickens

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Jul 31, 2026
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Sorry, I forgot to post yesterday (and the day before?) My wallet went missing, and I’ve done nothing but turn the house inside out trying to find it for a few days. But, for my paid supporters, here’s the next UNEDITED chapter so you get to follow along before it ever hits the bookstore.

Chapter 5

Two FBI agents in black suits led Plant Manager Justin Booker to an interview room, while Athena watched from a distance. At forty-two, he was a tall, muscular man with dirty-blonde hair and a down-to-earth quality about the way he moved and interacted with the agents.

“Well?” asked Detective Bach, looming at Athena’s side. “Aren’t we going to go ask him questions?”

She spared him an impatient glance. “In a few minutes. Didn’t anyone teach you how to make an entrance?”

He frowned. Athena noticed he’d made time to shave during the lunch break. “I don’t generally ‘make an entrance.’ I’m not a diva.”

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